- The opening drags on for too long, we are going to cut some of the shots from inside the house.
- Recorded some more diegetic sound. The characters don't talk enough which makes the viewer think that maybe they aren't in a relationship and that she is a prostitute. Also add some laughter to show they are close and comfortable around each other.
- In the killing scene, we need more point of view shots from the killer.
- The car is traveling across the country road and a very slow pace, so we need to either speed it up or re-shoot the shots.
- More cut shots need to be added in.
- Cut down the shots of the killer approaching the car to make it happen quicker, its drags on for too long.
The Team
We are Flatline Films and we are currently in the process of producing our debut film 'Roadside'.
Director - George Gamble
Producer - Roam Hamilton
Cinematographer - Harry Knight
Here is our FlatLine Fims blog.
Director - George Gamble
Producer - Roam Hamilton
Cinematographer - Harry Knight
Here is our FlatLine Fims blog.
Thursday, 10 March 2011
GG - Changes to be made from feedback
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