After gathering feedback from our second rough cut we were told that we needed to improve:
- Speed up the car footage, because it looks as if the car is driving to 'leisurely' and not quick enough.
- Change the order of the shots when the villain is walking up to the car. With a point of view shot of the villain 'stabbing' the 'scream queen.'
- The use of a 'Boom Microphone' so the sounds of the car unlocking and the 'scream queens' scream so they sound a lot better.
- Add a few more shots to make it longer. For example shots of Megan turning on the radio and of a road sign.
We still have to add the idents and the soundtrack to our production.
We still have to re-shoot our opening shots which we are doing tonight (Tues 1st March.) We are also going to get a few more shots of the final 'stabbing' as well tonight.